Scissorhand

Five...
...or six.

I watched our rough cut five or six times this afternoon taking notes on possible final drafts of our teaser. Please enjoy the following:

FINAL DRAFT IDEAS

1. Simple Corrections:

• replace footage with freeze frame of [7:00 a.m.]
• tighter edit on the 2nd [gargle] edit
• credit both songs
• efface the long pause before the [door]
  
• re-order [cereal pouring]:
• connect Cherrios and milk
• fix the "popping" back-and-forth"

2. Reshuffle:

• underlay [Tiger] behind song credits, final frame
• show [exiting mirror]
• BRIGHTEN all the lighting and colors
  
• re-order [waking] sequence:
  
• 6:59 > sleeping > 7:00 > hand on table
  
• delete the [walking out]
• jump cuts across the room
• entire sequence
• leave just the hand
  

3. New Score:

• *alarm buzzer* cuts off score
• fade in after [intertitle]
• completely new score:
• "S.P.A.T.", Badly Drawn Boy
• "File Me Away", Badly Drawn Boy
• "Feeling Good", Michael Buble
• "Unusual Day", Jane Powell
• "Like Love", Gene Kelly

4. Add a Lady:

• female voice-over?
• icon images as intertitles
  
• freeze-frames:
• on the cell phone
• high-heels